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Editing

grammar, punctuation, and style

Editing Illustrations and Websites

This is a critique of The New York City Ballet's print material and web site according to the "List of major concerns editors should have when reviewing illustrations and websites."
Critique of New York City Ballet print and website PDF 277KB
List of major concerns editors should have when reviewing illustrations and websites PDF 277KB

Quantitative Information Table Design

I redesigned a table of quantitative information to be more concise and easier to read.
Original table PDF 55KB
Redesigned table PDF 70.8KB

Punctuation Exercise

I edited the passages in this assignment for punctuation, and provided warrants for my revisions.
Original passages PDF 46KB
Final passages with markup PDF 145KB
Final passages without markup PDF 8KB

Nouns and Pronouns Exercise

I edited the passages in this assignment for proper use of nouns and pronouns, and provided warrants for my revisions.
Original passages PDF 57KB
Final passages with markup PDF 210KB
Final passages without markup PDF 60KB